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PostSubject: Story competition   Wed Mar 13, 2013 12:39 am

RIGHT SO HERE ARE THE RULES FOR THE NEXT STORY competition

1. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MAJOR SEXUAL SCENES, I understand if it flows with the story but if it gets out of hand the story will be removed
2. Must be a mystery story
3. has to be longer then 2 paragraphs
4. The characters can have mabinogi names but please refrain from using mabinogi, make your own, unique, you can use people in the guild if you want to make more fun though.
5. HAVE TO INCLUDE ONE OF THE 6 LISTED
1.Cloud/Jacob
2.Sin/Kathy
3.Aes
4.Chaos
5.windy/megumi
6.Lyl
6. No going to shadowbane for auto-correct
7. Have fun <3

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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:45 am

I expected Zathrian to be in that list but I guess he got scrapped or something. Also lol at the major sexual scenes, I can so imagine Zath making that apart of his story (if he does one).
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Wed Mar 13, 2013 9:21 pm

JOKE STORY
(cause i'm upset that i wasn't a part of the list :c)


Pachi was sitting alone in a room with a full cookie jar under her bloo blanketed and safely guarded by her penguin. There was a knock on the door. There was no one in a 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 mile radius. Pachi opened the cookie jar and...IT WAS EMPTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

Ya'll can tell me your explanations for what happened on skype or something ;D

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PostSubject: Salad's Story (The Best Story)   Fri Mar 15, 2013 12:42 am

Cloudy had quite the problem on his hands. It was Sunday, 7:55 P.M PST and a new episode of The Walking Dead was about to air but there was no remote. This would send anyone into a state of panic, but Cloudy kept his cool (Get it? Because average cloud temperature is 3 degrees fahrenheit!). Cloudy pulled out his gun, put on his ski mask, and left his house to steal the remotes of his neighbors.

Gun fully loaded, Cloudy knocked on his neighbor’s door super-duper hard. A tall, strong, well-chiseled man with a tight butt opened the door. He was wearing a pink wife-beater, sunglasses, green beach shorts, and flip-flops. Just your average everyday douchebag.
Cloudy cocked his gun, and shoved the douche aside.

“Where is your television remote!” yelled Cloudy, pointing the gun at a pomeranian dog. The douche pursued Cloudy into his living room to his horror. The life of his puppy was in danger, and he was powerless. But something quite unsettled the douche.

“Yo, bro!” said the douche. “Where the hell are your pants?” Cloudy looked down to discover that his pants were, in fact, not there. Confusion struck Cloudy as hard as Saladman strikes down children. The douche punched Cloudy in his confusion. Cloudy’s piece flew out of his hand and landed by the pomeranian.

The douche suddenly jumped on top of Cloudy in an aggressive way and they started to wrassle. Cloudy, being the macho bruh he is, easily snapped the man’s arm in half and ripped it off with a single hand. It was pretty badass, you should have been there. All of a sudden, the sound of a gun cocking was heard. Cloud and the douche turned to see the gun being held by the pomeranian. The dog didn’t shoot though, as he was confused as which person was his real owner. Kinda like a cliche movie scene where the wife has to shoot either her husband, or the robot that looks like her husband.

“Sprinkles, it’s me!” said the douche. “Your loving master! Remember when I picked you up from the pound, you took a dump on my carpet, and I punted your ass outta my house? We can create more memories like that, if you shoot him! He’s an imposter!”

Cloudy glared at the dog and said a single phrase: “I will neuter you with my teeth.” The gun went off and the douche dropped to the ground, dead. “Excellent choice.” Cloudy then found a television remote to only discover to his horror that the douche used Dish Network instead of Xfinity Comcast like normal people.

Cloudy left the house after taking his gun back from the dog and went to another neighbor. He pressed the doorbell and an old lady greeted Cloudy.

“Yo biatch,” said the old lady. “I’m trying to watch Jersey Shore reruns, what the hell do you want?” The geezer was what the hip children call “swagged out.” She was wearing really tight skinny jeans with hats on each belt loop, stunner shades, a fro comb in her grey afro, and a coconut bra. She was like a female Kanye West, but worse (Which is close to impossible).

Cloudy decided to end her miserable life and shoot her in the face. Stepping over the body, Cloudy entered the premises and looked for the television remote, only to be foiled again. The television was on static! Since Jersey Shore is just as good as static, the old lady probably couldn’t tell the difference.

Cloudy’s patience was running out. He would go to rob one last house of it’s television remote and if he failed, then he would do what every American fears doing: Actually look for the remote.

Cloudy knocked on a door with such force, the door broke off it’s hinges and landed with a great “uw9eahc!” Barack Obama was sitting down watching his second presidential inauguration for the 69th time. Cloudy didn’t want to be an international criminal today, so he just slapped Barack and he was out like a blacklight (get it, because he is black!).

Much to Cloudy’s disappointment, all the president had in that house was a VCR player and a television. There wasn’t even any furniture other than a sleeping bag, which probably wouldn’t count, and a picture of a crying Mitt Romney. Cloudy returned home, full of shame.

Walking back, Cloudy looked up at the sky. The stars were out and he could make out some of the constellations. To attempt cheer himself up, he tried to make a constellation in the shape of male genitalia. He succeeded and made a mental note in his mind to blog about it later.

Cloudy reached his porch and placed his hand on the doorknob. It was locked. Cloudy reached his hand in his underwear to rummage for his keys. He pulled out a few pieces of candy before he felt a familiar object. It felt great in his hands and he realized that he can spend so much time wasting time with it. Retracting his arm out of his undergarments, Cloudy could hardly contain his excitement. The big black Xfinity remote was in his underwear the whole time.

Cloudy then took out his keys, opened his door, turned on the TV, and cried. It was 9:02 P.M PST and he was greeted with the stupid talk show, The Talking Dead. Cloudy would have to wait at least 3 hours before the episode appeared ON Demand. This brought Cloudy to tears and he cried and cried for 9 minutes and 11 seconds. Suddenly, a revelation came to Cloudy.


The Internet exists.

Written and directed by Kingtavone Savang
Produced by: M. Night Shamaylan
CGI Supervisor: Stephanie Meyer

Starring:
Nicholas Cage as Cloudy
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Fri Mar 15, 2013 12:49 am

@Salad
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-flips you back down into the punishment well-

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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Fri Mar 15, 2013 12:59 am

Pachi wrote:
@Salad
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-flips you back down into the punishment well-

SEVEN DAYSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:54 am

Story!?
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Give Me 5 Hours
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:42 pm

When is the deadline and is fanfiction allowed? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Mon Mar 18, 2013 9:23 pm

yes Fan fiction is allowed, but please Make another thread and put "Story competition" this is for everyone

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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Mon Mar 18, 2013 9:28 pm

I just think and write so there might be lots of grammar epic falls watch out for those.

As Cloud's holding her hands. Sinny's body keeps shaking, the same nightmare again. But this time, she couldn't run, the attacker came too close to her. Even though it was dark out there, she could see the blood all over him. His eyes gazed at hers. His hand was grabbing a hatchet. One second later, he was ready to chop her off. Five meters away, four, thrEE, TWO, ONE !!! BAM!!!
A memory comes back to her. A terrible accident, it had taken her legs. She rests her head on Cloud's shoulder, the memory just keeps making her tears come out.
In the morning, she's getting on the wheelchair with Cloud's help. he's just done making breakfast for them.
Afternoon, their friends come. Lyl, Zath, Windy, Chaos, Tray, Oachi, Aest, Aed,... Today is Feb 28th, her birthday. Everyone is happy except her. Two p.m, the bell rings again, it's Lyca.
She hadn't seen him for more than a month since that accident. Everyone can guess that he hasn't slept for years because of the pouches on his eyes. She always sees him with that same smile. In fact, that smile never change. Now she realizes that his smile looks just like hers, fake smiles.
That day was a disaster. Era and her were driving to town for ingredients to make cookies for the meeting. Suddenly, a car hit their car slightly from behind.
-"What is wrong with these people." she said while still driving the car. Since the meeting place (which is Cloud and her's house) was and still is the only building around here. It was a surprise to see any stranger. Suddenly, a car came out from the forest.
-"Watch out!" Era yelled loudly and BAM!!!
It was dark when she woke up. Era disappeared and Sinny's leg got stuck. Then she saw something, no it was someone in the forest. She yelled and turns on the car's light for help. After five times later. A figure came out and walked toward her. It was the man in the nightmare, with the same hatchet. That figure terrified her even more when he approached her car while the blood is dripping down from the hatchet. Then he turned back and ran straight to the forest without hesitate. And a shadow passed by her opposite window.
-"Sinny, Sinny are you okay?" Cloud yelled as he was searching for her.
-"Please help me out of here. My legs..." She cried as she started to feel the pain began to overwhelm her.
The police said that her car got crashed from the front and also the back by two anonymous cars. And he decided that it was just an accident. Era's corpse was founded near the edge of the forest, right where she saw that man.
She didn't tell anyone about the man that day because she didn't want to get into any trouble, in fact she was scared, and still is. Even Cloud, her husband, the closest person to her.
Dinner, everyone finds their seats and quietly wait for the announcement from Cloud.
-" So guys, today is Sinny's birthday, Feb 28th, Happy birthday Sinny."
-"Happy birthday Very Happy" Everyone says at the same time.
-" So how old are you now?"
-"Dude Ryeu did you just ask a girl her age ?"
-"Can I ? o-o" "
-"Woah, so much foods I have never seen this much food before!" Windy yells out with her shiny eyes *-*.
-" B-but I want bloo cooki- " Lyl hushes Oachi as the room goes silent.
A disaster mood fills the room until Cloud breaks it with his usual voice.
-"Please leave the past alone, now let's dig in people."
Since the house is far away from the city, everyone stays over for the night. One o'clock, Sinny can't sleep, her mind is a mess. The accident, the man, Era, Lyca, Cookie... She gets on the wheelchair and goes to the kitchen for some milk. Lyca is sleeping on the couch as quietly as possible. Poor Lyca, Era's death must have affected him fiercely. Then, she hears something, the door is wide open, she tries to see who opened it. Locking the front door wondering who it was. She's shocked by the figure's staring at her since forever. Lyca.
-"Oh don't lock it, someone is still outside" Lyca smiles. Still the same smile
-"So, how is it? Having fun living with him? I'm glad."
His smile changes into an evil smile, a smile of nothingness.
-"Who just went outside?" She acts like he didn't say anything.
-"Oh you should know who that is." He says as he lays back on the couch.
She lays on her bed again, noticing that Cloud is gone. He's probably the one who went outside... But where is he going at this time of day? She keeps thinking about him until finally passes out.
That nightmare again, that man again with the hatchet. The hatchet is still aiming for her head. Five, four, three, two, one. Stop... It stops moving. It stops midair right above her. Until now she notices that someone is yelling for help... And there is a light comes from nowhere, flashing right at him. Now, she can finally see his face, his arms, his tattoo...
IT"s CLOUD
She's awake...Perspiring on bed...Staring at Cloud... who is sitting on bed right next to her...
-"STAY AWAY FROM ME, YOU MURDERER!!!"
She drags herself to a corner.....
-"what's wrong with you dear?" He says like he's an innocent.
-"You are the one who killed Era!!!"
-"what are you talking about?"
-"Stop lying to me... That same tattoo, that same face who tries to kill me in the nightmare"
-"Era, Wakky wakky~~. Sinny was the one who died. And YOU were the one who killed her yourself, dear. For us"


~Lycafesua~
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Thu Mar 21, 2013 3:29 pm

Shocked Sin I'm sorry </3
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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Thu Mar 21, 2013 11:56 pm

wat a twist O: !!!
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PostSubject: MYSTERY BWAHAHAHAHA   Sat Apr 06, 2013 8:52 pm

Tis was a normal day, and then I decided to with windy to a mystery adventure. Not knowing what it was I knew i would die either way -tear-. I came along as clueless as a dog cooking in a kitchen. We rented a hot air balloon- I have no idea what im doing. She wanted to train her shields and I'd be bard. WYVERNS SHOWED UP- "OH I JUST SHAT BRICKS,"- one hit kill and she just kept using her shields as I die. It felt like that remix of Justin Bieber getting shot.


I was still dying being emotional support and then we moved to another area with the lesser strong wyverns. Still died, -cry me a river-. But there was that moment, A very special one... I HIT ONE OF THEM HAHAHAHAHAHHA. a lot of mystery isnt it?

-based on a true story-


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PostSubject: Re: Story competition   Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:23 pm

YOU'RE MY FAVORITE LUM BERRY EVERRRR
I can actually imagine myself snuggling with a ladeca :3
I've always loved them ;w;

@lyca's story
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That story is so twisted from plot twists and just being plain twisted....I can't even sit right o~o

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